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The 'moment' (pun intended) you've been waiting for! (At least, I've been waiting for it.) The first page of "Moments of Clarity".
1. I redid some of the dialog in paint last night for either sloppiness of handwriting, or the fact that the scanner cut off some of the words. I didn't redo Lancers thought boxes because it was too hard to do on paint and my handwriting was legible. But if anyone has trouble, I'll translate.
2. I don't like the way I drew Sam on this page. Sooo ugly... The only one I like is in panel 7.
3. Paulina isn't lookin' too good in panel 7 though...
I know my backgrounds are horribly bland, so if anyone has constructive criticism or tips on that, it would be helpful.
Next Page: [link]
DP(c)- Butch Hartman
MoC(c)- ~WingsofMorphius
Drawings(c)- Me, RabidMSTie
1. I redid some of the dialog in paint last night for either sloppiness of handwriting, or the fact that the scanner cut off some of the words. I didn't redo Lancers thought boxes because it was too hard to do on paint and my handwriting was legible. But if anyone has trouble, I'll translate.
2. I don't like the way I drew Sam on this page. Sooo ugly... The only one I like is in panel 7.
3. Paulina isn't lookin' too good in panel 7 though...
I know my backgrounds are horribly bland, so if anyone has constructive criticism or tips on that, it would be helpful.
Next Page: [link]
DP(c)- Butch Hartman
MoC(c)- ~WingsofMorphius
Drawings(c)- Me, RabidMSTie
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1700x2340px 932.55 KB
Make
HP
Model
HP ScanJet 3970
© 2007 - 2024 RabidMSTie
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Wow! It looks really good! I can tell you worked really hard on this. It's very hard to translate a story into a comic, but you are doing a fabulous job. 
Keep up the good work! 
Keep up the good work!